8th gr. English Task

Tole’s Bootie

My name is Tole. I was to be a mad king ever and this is my story about my little bootie, name’s Susi in the drought kingdom.

Last 3 years, about early evening, my Susi went to mud field. She got sick, because she played mud to much & cause her sneeze. By chance, I was thirsty too. Long day I didn’t drink any water. So, I went to water store to buy some water. Many water there were running here & running there and I caught one mililitre of water nobody there, so I brought that to my palace. Susi was so happy. I washed her carefully before the sunset. Then, Susi was sunbathing for a while. I was afraid if the sun is burning my Susi, my Susi become cold. Well, I pray to the sun make sure Susi is not burn anymore. By the way only 0.5 mililitre of water I had that was my last hope. But, the water was arogan and gone to the sky then said goodbye to me. I was very proud but also sad. Why were my water could be a cloud and I couldn’t drink it. I couldn’t think longer, so I fainted.

Oh, I dreamed about many water came to me. I was so happy and my Susi couldn’t sneeze anymore. My kingdom became a sea kingdom. Oh, I became a sea king there. I swam here. I swam there. But my Susi cough very loud. Apparently, that was real action. From my pray (a few times ago), the sun was not burning my Susi. But, sun gave my kingdom many clouds and it rained. But, what was that? My Susi got cough. So, I pray to the moon make sure no water in the earth (?)
Why didn’t you let got sick?

Gabriel Ansel 8D-18
just 4 ms. Peny :)